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    September 10

    湖边秋风送爽

    秋风送爽
    小心火烛
    乘兴而去
    不欢而散
    何以消愁
    唯有看书
    可惜书还不如
    网上的小说
    鲜活真切
    善良的死神
    你可是双子
    的朋友?
     
    女孩的直觉
    犹如
    神之审判
    远遁
    燕园
    灵魂的栖息地
     
    南门
    横幅依旧
    行人如昔
    湖水
    绿不见底
    却不敢直视
    只恐迷失
    在百年的
    沉淀
     
    我要从南走到北
    我要从白走到黑
    于是
    向北
    朗润湖
     
    昔日的湖面
    已成荒草地
    昔日的长椅
    不知坐着谁
     
    归去归去
    不如归去
     
    掠过湖的西侧
    没由来的想起
    那个背影
    一缕斜阳
    让WM惊为天人
    美丽是在
    心中的
     
    南门进
    东门出
    一个小时
    走完了
    七年的生活
     
    七年了
     
     

    Comments (7)

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    Picture of Anonymous
    晶灵ame wrote:
    quote:
    善良的死神
    你可是双子
    的朋友?

    算不上朋友, 应该是知己吧
    你明白的
    Dec. 13
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    Leon wrote:
    可以加有几张逆光下的燕园湖水,上荡漾着博雅塔悠悠倒影。不论多少年,当年燕园的情景一直印在心里。
    Sept. 14
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    终不悔九死落尘埃 wrote:
    哇,你也是看 《道缘儒仙》 的么?
    Sept. 13
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    nothing2say wrote:
    哈哈,第一次出现在某人的诗作中拉,人生完整了...
    btw. 什么天人啊,我现在只知道仙人,神人,三清天神...
    而且我的眼里只有你,没有她,呵呵
    Sept. 13
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    终不悔九死落尘埃 wrote:
    不错,不错
    benyu总能让我有惊喜,嘿嘿
    Sept. 11
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    bloon wrote:
    原来你会写诗。//admire
    Sept. 11
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    kolafish wrote:
    南门
    横幅依旧
    行人如昔
    湖水
    绿不见底
    却不敢直视
    只恐迷失
    在百年的
    沉淀

    沉淀后面应该加个“里“,这样就有了几分打油的色彩,对吧?
    Sept. 10

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